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When Will It Be Enough
By: badkitty
How much bullshit can one take ? Day in and day out I let you
run over me, when will it stop. It all started about 13 years
ago, when we first met. We used to hate each other and fight
back and forth. Then we grew to love each other. We were
inseparable and nothing ever came between us. But there was a
tiny bump in the road, your terrible attitude made me carry
one also.your personality grew on me so much i became lost and
i didn't know who i was. It got really bad about one year
ago when i found a new best friend. I think you began to feel
left out , then came along your best friend. you talked to her
everyday. And thats when everything went really bad we lost
total communication. Thats when i became another object in the
room. I just distanced myself from you, and slowly watched
what happened.I can go days and maybe even weeks without
talking to you. But with that rises a problem. She just began
to take my stuff without asking and i would never say
anything. i want to but i just don't know how to. It
doesn't even faze you about whats really happening, i
just sit here like a mime and im tired of it !! Help me !!
What should i do ?
Comments
Dasmeer
I read this and I compared it to your first one. I'm not sure exactly what the difference is, but I like how smart you are in your writing. And the picture is puurrrfect! lol. I hope you write something else soon. It would be fun to see what else you come up with. hehehe...
- October 29, 2014
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judy_ann
Check grammar and punctuation. It's hard to read when the punctuation isn't correct. The Content is of the story is very familiar having had lost friends along the way. Keep writing to develope your voice, there's a lot of folks out there that will understand where it is your coming from Cool.
- November 2, 2014
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I read this and I compared it to your first one. I'm not sure exactly what the difference is, but I like how smart you are in your writing. And the picture is puurrrfect! lol. I hope you write something else soon. It would be fun to see what else you come up with. hehehe...