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a poem about my thoughts on where humanity is going hope you like it.
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The Future
By: McPimpy
I see a dreary future
With the way humanity is
I see a future where there is no suture
And no good thing can come from it
Our governments will become smart
Where they will learn from the mistakes
Unlike from the start
They will try to fix the world for our sakes
In this future i see
A world with no guns
A world where every one can be
A world where no one shuns
But this can be a bad thing
Life is a cycle where everything happens again
Yes people will sing
On how the world is going to be fine
In reallity they cause more problems this way
They make it so the weak have no fighting chance
Where the people with strength are in halfway
The weak have no advance
In this future they dont really have a hope
They go through it being the helpless
And never do anything to cope
This is the future i see
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Dasmeer
This is a very dreary poem. You seem like a pessimist. Cheer up, will ya!!
- November 3, 2014
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This is a very dreary poem. You seem like a pessimist. Cheer up, will ya!!