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its a good poem read and critique
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the cycle of light and dark
By: McPimpy
the darkness envelopes the sun
the sun destroys the darkness
the darkness strikes again
the sun blocks the darkness
its a vicious cycle with no end
they go on and on
but no one realizes
if there was no light there cant be darkness
and if there was no darkness there would be no light
they cant win the battle
because in the end they would destroy each other.
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Will
Very good point here. You never think of this battle happening day after day, night after night. Very good observation. And its interesting how you look at it.
- November 3, 2014
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Very good point here. You never think of this battle happening day after day, night after night. Very good observation. And its interesting how you look at it.