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Writer Notes
it is from a time that i had a bad day i hope you like it
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Listen to the Reader
sounds
By: McPimpy
I hear the cracking of bones
and it is a lovely tone
i hear the crackling of fire
on top of a pyre
i think of the sound of a knife plunging
while in a dungeon
i think of glass breaking
as you go through a raking
there are a ton of sounds
some just fall with a bound
the best sound of all
is the sound of the writhing thrall
Comments
Will
This is one of your most interesting -- yet disturbing -- poems. I enjoyed it very much. But it makes me believe its poet is a bit disturbed. lol
- November 3, 2014
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This is one of your most interesting -- yet disturbing -- poems. I enjoyed it very much. But it makes me believe its poet is a bit disturbed. lol