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By: Kayla

In all my years of school, I was never really the one to keep

many friends, until I met my best friend of five years. We

instantly clicked our goofy, upbeat, scandalous friendship.

This is a reason why we have been close for all these years.

We do many things that shouldn't but it’s all fun

and games. Reese is the only person have because I don't

find it easy to open up to people. She always keeps me

laughing and I don't know what I would do without her,

she has got me through many of my bad moments, and made the

best out of my 4 years in high school. She is always in a good

mood and we are both goofy. We wasn't close the whole

five years but we got really close in our 10th grade year. We

had child development together and we noticed that we should

be closer, so we started working together and on weekends we

would hang out. As this happened we both lost all of our other

friends. But it didn't faze us because we had each other.

Our families had even grown closer we went on a vacation

together to the Miami Florida. We stayed there for 1 week.

This was the best vacation I ever gone on. We had class

together every day 2 times a day. We made sure we did all our

work and also had time to joke and play. Our goofy

personalities made the teachers love us, we would always put

people in a good mood. Some of the silly things we would do

was prank our teacher and people in the hall ways. Once were

graduated we thought we would see each other anymore. We both

didn't really have any plans to go to college, but we

both knew we needed to. By the end of June we began talking

and we were both thinking about going to the same college. We

even attend class together and it is the best thing that could

ever happen to me.

Comments

Will

This work is very touching. We should all be so lucky to have a best friend like that. In terms of grammar, it would be nice to see some paragraphing. Also, your first line is a little awkward, the part that reads, "until I met my best friend of five years." After all, your friend was not your f...

October 9, 2014
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Joycie

Yes. I enjoyed reading this as well. It's nice to read about people caring and valuing each other. And it was really well written, Kayla . You have a good writing style.

October 9, 2014
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Corrie

I could see how you feel about your friendship by the way you write. I was confused by line six. There seems to be a word missing or maybe different punctuation to get your meaning across with more clarity.

October 10, 2014
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