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alice17
Purple
By: alice17
One day, you told me that Purple is your favorite color.
I wish that purple can heal you
If purple could heal you, I would give purple flowers everyday
in a purple vase that will make your day
I would wear purple lip stick so I come leave kisses on you
face
Wish there was purple days and purple nights
If only purple could heal you, I will give a purple glass of
purple kool aid with purple ice so you would have a purple
tong
I would go to the end of the world to find you the perfect
purple yarn so I could make you a purple body suit from head
to toe
Oh how I would give you a purple world
But for now, I just give you a purple poem
I love you
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