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The Jumping Platform
  • User booboo17
  • Miscellany / Bulletins
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  • 10 years ago


Writer Notes

This is a bulletin or flyer I'm suppose to write for our community center. I'm one of the project managers. But I think I might have mentioned The Jumping Platform too many times. Can you let me know? Thanks everyone!!

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