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It's Cold Out Here
By: OPGBrandon
Nichole, will you show me your heart?
Will you open it wide?
Will you tear down the wall?
Will you let me inside?
There's nothing implied
I'm at your front door
I literally mean
Will you let me inside?
I think I just saw a raccoon
All burglary eyed
Those things fucking scare me
Please let me inside
I tried to climb through your window..
..but I was too wide.
You should get bigger windows..
..or let me inside.
Are you angry with me?
Are you preoccupied?
Are you taking a shit..
..and can't let me inside?
Poll Results
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Is It Interesting? 5 Vote(s)
80%
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Are the sentences smooth? 5 Vote(s)
66%
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Is the narrative voice appropriate? 5 Vote(s)
78%
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Are the word choices good? 5 Vote(s)
72%
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Is the dialogue believable (if any)? 5 Vote(s)
78%
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