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Eruptions of Paradise
By: OPGBrandon
Under the soft warm blanket, laying side by side, they began
grinding against each other. Slowly at first, then harder and
harder. The pushing and thrusting and grinding produced
unbearable amounts of heat. Finally, when it seemed like the
two could not take it any longer, the lighter one slid on top
of the heavier one, and rode on top. As the one on top
prepared to erupt into the world above, the warm blanket of
ocean moved to the sides. The two rock formations, no longer
laying side by side, now formed what is called an island.
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